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FA - Torn and forgotten by ~melkoshi:iconmelkoshi:


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Alright I just spent like a week on this I sware. *dies* x_x

anyways! I bet you can't guess whos that! o: *points to the family* It's the House Family picture. Back when David was about 2-4(He's suppose to be 2 but he looks like he's 4..so I might change that to that age.) and his mother and father were together still...Yep thats Carrie there and..*points at the ripped out part and the hand on David's shoulder* Thats David's dad! =D Ben!! ...Yes XD Ashy decided to make up a character to be David's dad...and his name is Ben!! =D XD

If your wondering tho, after Carrie devorced Ben for cheating on her...with another man. (why do you think she hates that David's gay so much? this is why!) she went and ripped him outta all the pictures. so David completely forgot what he looked like and such. as he was only like..little.

Anyways, yeah Thats what David looks like little. :3 and What Carrie looked like younger!! *points* omg whore!! D: I orginaly didn't have that jacket ...god too much skin DDx ..so I gave her a pretty purple jacket. >.> But yeah, I tried keeping her short hair style but it just...didn't look right so I decided to try long hair and it turned out pretty. :3 so I kept it.

Omg I love the fricking background. DD: *point point POINT* all airbrushed, no reff or anything just messing around! the Park bench sucks I know..but god the bushes and crap DD: **loves how they look** I'm proud of that background! DD:

And..Sadly, I wish I drew Ben in more now that he has a offical design .-. (Thank you Ashy!!) I drew the outline before Ashy made him up. XD ..and I just noticed but, he's suppose to have his knee and arm in the picture. knee bent and sitting down practily to get into the picture. like how Carrie is. But now that I look at it, it looks like he's just... a midget ._.;;;

I also tryed some effects on this. the picture is suppose to look old and ruined. and the picture frame/glass is suppose to look like it's covered in a dust of dirt and crap. ._. I rather like how this all turned out tho :3 I think this is the best i've done in a while too. i'm quite proud of this piece. :3

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Time: nearly a week. I think maybe even more idk. I stop tho for a couple of days. so about..5 days while working on it? idk, I'd say a week. :3
Pose: oh..I really don't know D: I loved it tho and decided to use it. I take no credit for it.
Characters: David, Carrie - Mine. Ben - ~Batosia-koneko
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I still say David has a big head, and the back ground sucks but over all I LOVE this. XDD Especially Carrie. D: She looks good with long hair but I sadly have to say she looks alot like Riza tho. ><;;

David does look older then 2..I was thinking he was like, 5 honestly. And I don't think Ben looks like a midget, o_o; He looks fine to me. Carrie's leg is also bothering me, it looks kinda...weird. x.x though not to bad, I just blame that it looks like tiny passed her arm. >>;;

But I LOVE How David turned out and the frame and glass, just sooo cute! >w< Excellent work! :+favlove:

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Tho I still love them :heart:
XD thanks alot Ashy. :heart: :glomp: ^__^

Meep yeah she did remind me of Riza too. x_x;; but with long hair suited the picture more then her nromal short. *tried it...it no look good* and Yeah Carrie's leg bugs me too, but I tried like..agood amount of times and it just looked worse and worse so I said screw it. x_x;

...and yes David does have a fat head, it was worse tho before I resize it. XD;;; and yeah he does look older then 2. I guess I can't draw kids that young now. ._.; ...oh well 5 works too XD

^^ glad you like how it turn out tho. I'm happy it looks good *spent so much time on this..did mostly all the effects today alone x_x* Thank you once again! :glomp:

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AWWW LOOK AT LITLE DAVID!!!X3333 and no I do not like him when he old only when he looks like this.

he Is SO CUTE!!!!!!!
grate job!!! A++++
XD glad you think he's adorable then when he's little. >.> he's shy as heck too so it's even more cute!

Thank yuo! :glomP:

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O.O What are you talking about? I think the background looks awesome!! (but that's probably cuz I can't do a background worth a crap anyway....)

OMG! I totally luv dis pic! It all looks so.................so...............awesome!(God I need a new word) AMAZING!

But seriously, I think the background makes this whole picture look complete. Nice job!

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i dont think david looks right...but oh well...i really like haw you drew karie (sp?)
^^ Thank you. glad someone likes the background. :3 I tried to make it look...good and add to the picture which i think it did. :3

:glomp: thanks for faving it too. ^__^..and you do need a new word >>;;;

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^^; he's little so he doesn't look right imo. but thanks :3 I like how Carrie turned out too.

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